Editing services
Story-level editorial support for cozy mystery manuscripts
Manuscript Critique
What it is: A high level editorial assessment of your manuscript’s strengths and areas for improvement. This service focuses on big-picture storytelling elements such as structure, pacing, character development, and overall plot coherence.
Who it’s for: Writers looking for objective feedback on a full draft who are not yet ready for deep, collaborative editing. Perfect if you want to know whether your story holds together, what’s landing, and what to revise before investing in heavier edits.
What you’ll receive:
A 4–8 page editorial letter covering:
Plot structure and story arc
Character development
Scene pacing and flow
Plot consistency and reader clarity
Clear, actionable suggestions to guide your self-revision
Note this does not include in-manuscript comments
Developmental Editing
What it is: A hands on, collaborative edit focused on shaping and strengthening your manuscript’s structure. We’ll work through story flow, character arcs, world-building, tension, and digging deep into the mechanics of your novel to support a stronger, more engaging draft.
Who it’s for: If you want more than just feedback, looking for a detailed breakdown of how to improve and a partner to help map the path forward, this service is for you.
What you’ll receive:
A 6–10+ page editorial report covering:
Structure, plot development, and pacing
Character arcs and internal logic
Subplots, theme, and narrative cohesion
Chapter-by-chapter analysis
In-manuscript comments
1 x revision once you have implemented changes
What it is: A focused review of your opening chapter, examining how effectively it introduces voice, character, tension, and narrative direction. This service looks at clarity, pacing, point of view, and the strength of the opening hook.
Who it’s for: Writers who are looking for an editor but would like a sample of editing before committing to a paid service. I offer this free of charge. This is a no-pressure way to see whether my editorial approach is right for you and we are a good fit for each other.
What you’ll receive:
A 1 page report covering the opening hook and reader engagement
Character and stakes introduction
The opening hook and reader engagement
Character and stakes introduction
Practical, actionable suggestions for revision
Note This service is for a maximum of 2,000 to 3,000 words.
Free First Chapter Edit
For writers who want direction before revising
For writers who want support while revising
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